Friday, May 13, 2016

I am poem

I am…
Success Criteria
Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary
Choose the best nouns for the poem
Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns
Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you


I am a good learner  
I wonder if I could be marvellous at learning
I hear steve my kitten meowing  
I see kindness
I want to be a hip hop danser
I am good at reding(reading) books
I pretend to be a baby ber and go rar
I feel like I am in the sciy (sky) with pretend wings  
I touch my tedys(teddies) er (ear) when I go to bed
I worry adat(about) losing my haer (hair)
I cry when I fit with Cooper
I am a good learner
I understand I need to lisin (listen)
I say great things to my ferns
I dream of hip hop
I try my best
I hope I can be a good learner  

I am a good learner

I have been learner to do my own woke at school. Sometheing that has challenge me is wot was hard. It was hard to no wot is about me.I am proud of my woke(work) because I have got good werds(words).