Hansel and Gretel

Once upon a time there lived a girl and she was 8 and a boy that was 7  cod (called) Hansel and Gretel and a men (mean) stepmom. She looks like a mum (who) has just fallin into a pile of dog poo in levs (leaves) and her clos (clothes) just look like mud.One day the men (mean)mum mad (made)the dad tac the 2 kids into the forest but Hansel fan (found)papils (pebbles)on the ground so he grab them and when the dad was wocing (walking)hansel drop them on the way.In the mooning the dad was gon but Hansel got Gretel and they folod the glowing papils (pebbles).

On the way thay fand(found) a chooklite(Chocolate) home with shiny lollys and lolly pops and Hansel and Gretel went to eat the home … a men witch with a wot on her ponty nose lives there and put them in a caj (cage).They had to do lots of chores for the mean witch.The next day they heard something in the booshis and it was a posin(person) looking for them.It was their dad looking for them to take home and get them into good clen(clean) shos and wom and safe.So the dad chuks the mean witch in the fier and she smells like rotin eggs so she can neve hert ene(any) one agan.

I have been managing my distractions so I can do my best writing and I chose a good place to work.
I am proud of my writing because I worked had to get better at my sounds.
Something that challenged me was sounding my words out.
I did a good job on detaIl and dsciving(describing) the characters.

Matariki

Do you celebrat matariki ?
I had matariki in Totara.  I made tears with the green and the blue was the background. This is a tukutku pattern.It was so hard but I finished that day because I managed my distractions and it was hard.I cept my eyes on the bord(board).

Maths

Bossy e

I am learning abate the magic E.It makes it say it name.And it tricks you because you cant see it in a word only if you look closly (closely). It triks (tricks) me in  books. I am geting(getting) beta (better) at noticing them in words.