Bounce

Bounce bounce! As I jump so high I can tach(touch) the sky!Suddenly!I  felt the pan(pain) in my hip so I decided to sit down and have a rest for a minute. After I jumped up and I  to the balls mum tort(taught) me have(how) to roll over in a big ball. It was scary the first time but when I got yost(used) to it I kept doing it if I got stuck mum would help me.I found a friend and we  sprinted to the foam and did flips into it.Next I went to the climing (Climbing) wall and jump of the side of the banse(bouncy) casil(castle).Nexe I went to the rase  I rast(raced) my frened(friend) and I maed it araned the bouncy castle twice and wan(won) the rase. After mum came and told me it’s time to go home now so we went to the car and I said thank you for taking us.

I worked hard to put in lots of detail and I soundid it all out. My challenge was poting(putting) in the
sentence starter with the sentence ladder. I love the way I started my writing.